Scene Revision Toolkit

A practical set of revision tools to help writers diagnose and revise scenes quickly and confidently.

This downloadable toolkit includes:
– A quick scene diagnosis guide (flat, rushed, confusing—what to fix first)
– The 4-Layer Scene Method for revising in the right order
– Showing vs. telling conversion prompts
– A verb-audit tool to strengthen scene energy
– Scene map templates for drafting and revision
– Before-and-after sentence-level rewrites

Designed to be used alongside the Show, Don’t Tell class, this toolkit gives writers hands-on tools they can apply immediately to their own work.